When beauty no longer misleads us
When our bodies no longer separate us
When our achievements are forgotten
When all our mistakes have softened
When talking is no longer a commodity
When love abandons physical currency
When you have been there all along.
Copyright © Nomzi Kumalo, 2014.
Most Moving., Deep stuff.
I am so glad to be amongst your fans and followers.
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A lovely surprise. It is heartwarming that you took the time out Paula. I am glad that I found your blog too. I wish you a lovely and peaceful week. 🙂
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Your words make me say a sounding “Yes”…moving (to say the least)!
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What a lovely surprise Vee. I felt the same when I discovered your blog. “Yes” it is. Thank you both for your support. Have a super afternoon. 🙂
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Beautiful and Powerful
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Nomzi,
This is a beautiful. Thank you.
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Thank you Joycelin. Love is here. Have a super weekend. 🙂
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I hope you have a great weekend too. 🙂
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I so did and thank you. Today the sun is out. Like a miracle. When it is always there. I forgot what it is like to feel warmed by the sun. Boo hoo. 🙂
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Thank you for sharing that. I love the sun warmth too.
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🙂
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I really like the feel of your poetry. I like this one. I read it several times. 🙂
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Why thank you Laurie. “The greatest love of all”. Have a beautiful day. 🙂
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🙂 Much love to you. Oh, I had a question about your beautiful poem you sent for the journal.. Would you prefer it stay lined to the left or may it be centered? It is so beautiful it must be on a page by it self and I was just wondering… ❤
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Hello dear Laurie, I really would appreciate that it stays lined to the left. Thank you for asking also. I hope that you have a lovely week. ❤
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Yes. I felt that too. ♡ I kept it like that ♡♡♡ The designer changed it but I put it back ♡
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Thank you dear. You are a star. 🙂
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Thank you again for your sharing. I love it very much.
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Nomzi, your words hit home and so to the point! It makes living and looking at life from a place of authenticity and simplicity!
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The final line, ‘when you have been there all along’ speaks volumes and is certainly a testament to the title ‘Love until the end of time.’ It is a though-provoking poem and I enjoyed savouring it. 🙂
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Thank you for taking the time out Wendy. I am so glad that you enjoyed it. Sometimes we travel far and wide to look for love only to find that it is right under our nose. 😀
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Absolutely love this Nomzi!
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Why thank you so very much dear. Such a lovely surprise of a message. I hope that you are doing well and I wish you a festive season full of love and fun. Have a lovely week. 🙂
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What a powerful poem, Nomzi! Love it.
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I am so pleased that you feel that way, Tiny. Thank you so much for taking the time out. I truly appreciate your generous words. Have a fabulous week. 🙂
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“When you have been there all along” took my breath away!
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Marvelous Willow. Simply marvelous. I am so happy that you took the time to find out what this poem has to say. Have a fantastic week. 😀
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TREMENDOUS, Nomzi. The line “When all our mistakes have softened” is so on the mark but so understated too. And the last line – perfect.
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I agree with Tish. The line about our mistakes jumped at me. Mistake can soften, and when implies passage of time.
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Hello Timi. Such a lovely surprise to hear from you. 🙂 Yes, a lot mistakes soften with time. Sometimes it takes a few minutes, a few days, sometimes a lifetime, sometimes even longer than that. I reckon that forgiveness has a lot to do with the softening. On that note, have a fabulous week full of kindness and love. 🙂
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Thank you oh so very much, dearest Tish. How I grinned from ear to ear when I received your wonderful message. 😀 What more can I say without adding unnecessary explanations and such. I must say though that I do love this one and I truly appreciate your enthusiasm, consideration and support always. Much love and warmth in this festive season. Have a fabulous week. 😀
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